a gothic writing prompt

October 24, 2008

In honor of this season, and my favorite holiday, Halloween, this week we explore the world of Gothic poetry. (Oh, and to anyone reading us from down under, just play along). Gothicism as an artistic movement is largely part of the Romantic era. The Romantics turned away from the science and realism of the Enlightenment and focused on more subjective areas of experience. Gothic art was toward the fantastic end of what they explored, but spooky. On the non-spooky but still fantastic end was Surrealism.

(Click on the excerpt to read the entire piece.)

warning: this post has crabs

October 24, 2008

Retrospective of a Myth (continue) by RossinaBossioB

Hey, you. Yes, you. Go check out Postal Poetry. We just shared the first of several winning submissions from our September contest. We’ve also kicked off a second contest, and you have until Nov. 15 to submit work. The details on that contest are here. I’m warning you, though, wearing feather boas is involved. So you’d better have a couple at the ready.

(If contests aren’t for you, no worries. Just send in whatever work you like. We accept submissions outside of the contest.)

Also, don’t miss Read Write Poem. It has a new layout and several additional features, including a Monday image- or word-based writing prompt and a newsfeed featuring links to poetry- and participant news.

While you are making your way around the internets, check out Ouroboros Review, a new publication that Christine Swint and Jo Hemmant recently started. It’s going to be fantastic.

Those are all the places I can think of to send you. These links should keep you occupied for a least a little while.

Oh wait. Just one more link. This one is about hermit crabs. They have a housing shortage, you know. It’s serious stuff.

*I made the poetry postcard above with an image by RossinaBossioB in accordance with her Creative Commons license on the piece.

read write poem #49: operant conditioning

October 22, 2008

— for Cory

I
Wear a bag over your head long enough
and you will forget who you are.

II
Recount your last wishes.
Dig your grave.
Watch videotaped snuff.
Fire blanks at your own head.
It’s only over when we unload rounds
near your feet, when you dance.
This is your final warning.
(Consider yourself lucky.)

III
Eventually, the pressure on your fingers
will be too great. Arms stretched high
on the wall, legs several feet back and spread.
(These small bones weren’t meant to bear your load.)

IV
Stand. Sit. Run in circles. Stand. Sit.
The whole room hisses. The hissing
moves through you like snakes,
like a rough-vowen rope, like a demon.

V
(Nobody will believe you.)

VI
Sing. Sing for us. That’s right. Louder.

VII
What can’t be pushed back and stitched in.
What will not be reabsorbed or reattached.
On the table, you almost go slack.
You are wet with topical antiseptics.
The last of your heat wafts from your body.
Parts of you are sucked out through tubes.
The whole room is marked BIOHAZARD,
is marked TERROR, is marked WAR.

VIII
We half expect you to scream.
We half expect you to move
again, the way we want.

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This is a draft. Very much so. I am sure I’ll be noodling around with it a lot in the coming days and weeks.

A shout out to Tom for linking to an article on operant conditioning recently. It’s the inspiration for this piece. This started out as a personal piece about sexual abuse and ended up being about war-related torture. It’s really about both, for me anyway.

echolalia writing prompt

October 21, 2008

Poetry makes sense of the world by reminding us of our spiritual, meditative and focused natures. By reminding us what we share in common. By helping us open our hearts to possibility and change. The very act of writing and reading a poem can change the world in just the same way that a butterfly (or moth, for Dana) flapping its wings in South America can send a tropical storm northward the following year. Poetry is language at its most auspicious: true, beautiful and transformative.

(Click on the excerpt to read the entire piece.)

(collaborative) read write poem #48

October 15, 2008

For this week’s Read Write Prompt, Nathan Moore — the newest member of the RWP team — asked participants to write a collaborative poem draft word by word over on the Read Write Poem site. A number of people contributed words, some leaving only one and some coming back to provide more than one. To see everyone who contributed one or more words, check out the comments of this post, which is where all the action went down: Read Write Prompt #48.

Oh, and don’t skip over the post itself. Nathan shared a gorgeous essay on collaboration, and you wouldn’t want to miss out on that good stuff. No way.

The second part of the exercise was to take the draft and shape it into a poem. We were told that we could do as little revision, or as much, as we wanted. I didn’t add that much to the words we came up with, but I did add a little here, take a little away there. (I should note that the words I left out were simply ones I couldn’t fit into my version of the piece. There was nothing intrinsically wrong with them.)

I really enjoyed the exercise, and it’s given me some ideas for other poems that might play off this one. I can’t wait to see what directions others went in with the piece.

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And tatterdemalion slink across chrome alleys

jettison the days away,
scavenge what you need

your life no more than
a littering of tribal artifacts

irreparably damaged memories
etch sacred tablature

thighs hold tight
whomever strays close

your body a clasp
with faulty closure

what twinges like a guard’s
off-pitch obscenities

villas are depleted,
courtyards emptied of walkways

men make their way through,
no sure surface on which to stand

read write poem goes even more collaborative

October 10, 2008

And so for our prompt this week, we’ll do a word-by-word poem. That is, the first participant will leave a word in the comments section, the next participant will add the next word, and so on, until comments are closed at midnight Central Standard Time Sunday. Participants may take as many turns as they want, but place just one word per comment please. (And let someone — or someones — else take a turn after you go before you go again.)

fishing for poems

September 20, 2008

Read five poems by the same author, or five poems from five different poets. From each poem, choose a word you like, a word that jumps out at you. Write words cards (with one word noted on a card or paper slip), and place them in a box or an envelope. I use an old coffee can for this kind of writing exercise.

After you sit down to write your poem, draw one word, and let that word be a part of the first sentence or line you write. Continue writing your poem, drawing another word each time you come to a pause. Try to write eleven lines.

explore the elegy

September 10, 2008

Over time, in English, the elegy has evolved into what we now call elegiac verse. Poets have disregarded the more formal elements that traditionally were expected and have instead chosen to write poems about loss, grief and lament, both for specific people, groups — and even the environment — in a wide variety of forms.

poets like to watch

September 5, 2008

But this week, fellow Read Write Poem-ers, there are no mothers to protect us, no sheets to shield our view. Find a poem in the typical things that we can’t look away from, like train wrecks or car crashes or look deeper into our fascination with human oddities or other people’s domestic dramas. Peep at something you’re not supposed to see, like a couple having sex or a stranger crying.

catching words

August 29, 2008

One of my favorite sources of inspiration is the words of other poets. No matter how many times I think, “I have got to bring a notebook along with me to the bookstore,” I never remember. I end up buying way too many poetry books (as if this were possible! Too many? Ha! Never!), promising myself I will go directly home and write the poem that popped into my head.

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