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I like to come and go through different doors more than I like to throw my weight against the same one every time only to discover it was never locked; and I like to change the locks once in a while too; but it isn't just about keeping it interesting for the Author or Dear Reader; it is about how differently things actually are if you come and go by different portals. — C.D. Wright

read write poem #6: get your collaboration on!

Christine and I worked together this week, following the optional Read Write Prompt of collaborating with another participant.

Over the course of several days, we wrote this poem through e-mail. We went back and forth, one stanza at a time, each of us providing a stanza. I started the poem off, and Christine ended it. We kept the same pattern throughout — each stanza containing four lines and each line containing four syllables. There was more to the poem, but we cut the beginning off, since the poem really seemed to start once we got into the restroom. There was some stuff going on in a house and inside a car, but that didn’t seem to be the heart of the poem.

We did a little bit of editing once we were done, and below is what we came up with.
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Wrong Places

On the walls of
the bathroom stalls,
“No” is written
repeatedly

over words of
love and anger.
Who erases
proof of feeling?

If I were to
write anything
on a bathroom
wall what would it

say about me?
Strawberry girl
looking for love
in wrong places
,

like these dank stalls.
When did it come
to this, thinking
too long about

scrawled words from
strangers, drunken
missives, and not
my own wisdom —

like tarot cards
with all the good
ones gone missing.
For a good time,

call the Empress
of abundance,
grounded to the
earth. Don’t call me.

my american sentences

Someone’s written “No” all over the elevator walls: No, No, No.

my american sentences

Just when I’ve settled into the short days, the days start getting longer.

my american sentences

I shall evict my uterus for raising a ruckus inside me.

(Yes, it’s that time of the month. TMI. Deal with it.)

my american sentences

Tonight all the leaves skitter across the streets like rodents, so I swerve.

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Dana Guthrie Martin is a writer, editor, poet, and communications and grants manager. Her areas of interest include science, health, sustainability, cultural studies, literacy outreach and fine arts. Click here to read more about Dana.

My Gorgeous Somewhere is where she shares poetry and creative nonfiction, for the most part, with a dash of whatever else strikes her fancy.

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